From the feedback we were given, we have now removing the start of the sequence with the bus and replacing it with the main character getting on it which actually shows her travelling to work. I am going to change the font colour to gold as people thought the bright yellow was too gimmicky and redid the shot of Louise reading as some of her chin was cut out. People thought the ending was abrupt. To resolve this, we are going to add shots of Louise leaving her house, implying she is finally leaving for india. we are also going to redo a few other shots to make the sequence look better.
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