Feedback From Improved Title Sequence

When we showed our improved title sequence to the class everyone thought it was much better. They liked the colour of the typography and how it is not all the about the tickets to India. They also thought it looked much better without the bus scene at the beginning. However, The new shots we did they thought was too dark, even with the brightness changed; also they thought the end shot of the lift was slightly wonky. What we plan to do now is quickly reshoot these scenes on Monday so we can edit the in ASAP. Overall the class thought it was a massive improvement from the rough-cut.