Feedback From Improved Title Sequence

When we showed our improved title sequence to the class everyone thought it was much better. They liked the colour of the typography and how it is not all the about the tickets to India. They also thought it looked much better without the bus scene at the beginning. However, The new shots we did they thought was too dark, even with the brightness changed; also they thought the end shot of the lift was slightly wonky. What we plan to do now is quickly reshoot these scenes on Monday so we can edit the in ASAP. Overall the class thought it was a massive improvement from the rough-cut.

Feedback From Title Sequence (Rough Cut)

From the feedback we were given, we have now removing the start of the sequence with the bus and replacing it with the main character getting on it which actually shows her travelling to work. I am going to change the font colour to gold as people thought the bright yellow was too gimmicky and redid the shot of Louise reading as some of her chin was cut out. People thought the ending was abrupt. To resolve this, we are going to add shots of Louise leaving her house, implying she is finally leaving for india. we are also going to redo a few other shots to make the sequence look better.

Typography

Now we have decided our film idea, we have now started looking at the typography for the credits and title of our film. we selected out top six favourite font as and asked fifteen people what one they thought best suited our genre and themes of our film. The most popular ones was the third font which we now going to uses for the typography of our film. We got the fonts from Dafont.com

Feedback for Pitch Redone

Feedback From Pitch (first draft)

Once we had a film idea, we had to create a pitch for it which had to be presented to our whole class. Once we have finished presenting, we were given feedback on what to do to improve our presentation.


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